A dream poem

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(Villanelle-style poem)

<<Story related to the poem>>

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My friends were lost at sea,
While in their lively years,
On their fateful journey.

Freedom – they hope to see,
Confidence banished fears,
My friends were lost at sea.

Death – they couldn’t foresee,
Their blood mixed with their tears,
On their fateful journey.

“Rest in peace, in the sea,
Miss you, I will, my dears!”,
My friends were lost at sea,
On their fateful journey.

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by Nattachai Noogure.

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